My First Love Letter Poem by Valsa George

The desire to earth the emotion onto the page and deliver the message of love universally powerful and here a deftly penned account, I can relate.

The desire to earth the emotion onto the page and deliver the message of love universally powerful and here a deftly penned account, I can relate.

First stanza creates beautiful imagery of experiencing love at first sight.. Nice poem indeed. Happy writing.

This is a lovely poem Valsa with good imagery, I like it.

What a lovely first love letter from him to her, with the language of the eyes! - I loved the lines I dropped my secret whim / In the alluvial delta of her heart! So, so beautiful, Valsa!

Oh Valsa-ji, what a poem this is! Alluvial delta! You speak with words that don't speak but speak all the way. Glorious. If you permit me - may I leave a tenner here, although it won't add to your already gained glory. Thanks for inviting me to this beautiful gem of a poem.

Oh Valsa-ji, what a poem this is! Alluvial delta! You speak with words that don't speak but speak all the way. Glorious. If you permit me - may I leave a tenner here, although it won't add to your already gained glory. Thanks for inviting me to this beautiful gem of a poem.

Oh this is so beautifully composed with so loving words......Valsa.......one of the best love poems ever composed and I happened to read it ever.........10/10

First Crush, as far as I understood this is a description of first born daughter, i can imagine how she responded your love letter and how she has been responding it now. A lovely poem.

Excellent....that letter must be filled with beautiful selected letters_Soul