My Love And I. Poem by Fay Slimm

My Love And I.

Rating: 5.0


Straddling a passing white cloud as a steed,
We speed the night sky, my love and I.

Into the unseen, invisibly real
Sphere of the spirit we joyfully fly

To meet in moonshining starlit plain.
Delirious with love, powered by desire,
Skimming the ridge of the world we are again
Gloriously free. Longings aflame, imbibing
Passions' red wine we light up our fiery ride
Towards paradise. Brightening every star,
Unbinding every known boundary beside,
Shooting sparklets, we navigate spaces afar

And choose one to witness our love tonight.
Then consummate cyber- dreams in mid flight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 December 2008

Wooooooooooooosh! Ya got me P.C. wires melting at the connections! Amorous write, young lass....Sounds like a Christmas Eve, not to be soon forgotten...Splendid imagework...I like the theme......Very fine work, indeed, Fay...Just be careful how & where you navigate those sparklets! lol! FjR /*\

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 December 2008

Very passionate poem. Yeah! I too was travelling with u. Didnt u see me....

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 December 2008

Passionate Fay, may your love take you to where you want to be... Andy 10

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Kris Smith 24 December 2008

My pc has just melted Fay have a great Christmas and happy New Year 10+++++++ Chris

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Reshma Ramesh 24 December 2008

supersonic love...........and beyond.............

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Scott Austin 24 December 2008

Hey my screen is fogging up….spray them down with a water hose and tell them to get a room for the night…lol Really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing… I think….lol Take care Scott

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Fay Slimm

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in Cornwall U.K.
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