My Love To The River Poem by Thampi KEE

My Love To The River



But your eyes are shining
bright way you looks
shall we walk to the river
leaving behind all, to scoff

but the great sunrise
these old flowers
But you never know the scent of my rivers

I wish to show my old happy days here
I begin to write my love
where we swim and where we found him
The great joy made on me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 22 January 2013

I feel free with those lines..nice write kee_Soul

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Valsa George 21 January 2013

Thus to know the scent of your rivers, you are inviting your lady love for a stroll to the river side! I visualize you both walking hand in hand enjoying the cool breeze and watching the small wavelets! An imaginative write! ! Kee, thanks for the wonderful comments on my poem! !

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Gajanan Mishra 21 January 2013

Great sunshine begins to write love. good one.

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