my love...
you are the love of my life...
you are the one in my heart...
you are simply a beautiful rose...
in a group of yellow...
your the blood in my veins...
you are the one in my mind...
i would be completely lost without you by my side...
cherish every moment with you...
my heart and soul belongs with you...
i desire your touch...
your arms around me...
kissing me...
i miss,
us...
beautiful inside and out...
since we met...
you have fallen for me...
i was with another girl...
you used your beauty, your wits...
your everything to chase after me...
i fell you caught me...
she left me.. for another guy...
sad as i was... you were near by...
you helped me through my tough times...
you made me realize that you were worth a try...
i fell for you... you knew it too...
but it all came apart with a simple lie...
another guy....
and im just blinded in the eyes....
we fell apart...
no one caught me this time...
fell to the ground...
hit my head
my heart shattered...
so was yours...
we tried again...
we fell apart...
we will never be...
im sorry...
its really over between us...
i still love you...
but we just can never be like before...
im sorry...
Justin- Thanks for your sweet comment about my poem, it gave me the chance to look at your work and I'm very impressed, can't wait to read more! I give this one a ten. -shannon
awwwwwww...how sweet u still have feeling for ur girlfriend i love the way u show emotions on ur poems i can easily feel how u feel well done again justin
Justin, we all fall in and out of love.. Love hurts but life goes on, and down that road you will find a new love. Beautiful piece! Thanks for sharing...
this Poem tells a story and reveals the love and passion for which you hold I believe your Very talented and a very awesome poet I give you a 10 out of 10 you got it this feelings are extraordinary no matter what other's say express it
awww ilove it.. i song for my boyfriend.. but he broke up with me.. : -(.. he broke up with me last monday... 6/22/09.. i still love him.... I AM GIRL... I AM NOT BOY
i like it... it is so deep and i totally luv it! ! ! ! keep written
I could really relate to this one... especially consider the route my life has taken today...
This poem is so beautiful! I really love the part that says 'I miss, us' so many people acknowledge that they miss a person but this acknowledges the fact that two hearts can make one person
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL! ITS HAPPENED TO ME TOO...EXCEPT IN A GIRLS VIEW...