My One And Only Love Poem by Theany Ouy

My One And Only Love

Rating: 5.0


As the morning hits
Give way to the sun,
Another day without you
Has begun.
Days will go by
Our times will grow near,
Some tomorrow you'll turn
And I'll be there.
As i lay my head
And go to sleep,
It's only of us
I dream so deep.
Now the sun is setting into the hills,
With stabbing pains
My heart it fills.
Hand in hand we're together,
from that day on
It will be forever.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Hall 19 October 2007

Great poem! I only wish I had thought of it. Thanks for sharing.

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Neela Nath Das 16 May 2014

A passionate poem indeed.This is the fresh feeling for one's lover or beloved.it tends to be eternal.Great!

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

amazing....you are so filled with passion...again, you reach out to my soul and touch a place where I understand every word....check out a song by Leonard Cohan...In my Secret Life.... You just might enjoy his works...hugs n blessings

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Sajna Kailas 29 October 2011

how great your love is! ! ! ! beautifully written, nice work shows that you an emotional poet! ! ! ! !

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Maria C. Pires Costa 27 May 2010

Affective lines, conveying lovely emotions and the dream of 'being together forever'. Nice flow in rhyming likewise.

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 21 May 2010

Though it seems that only the memory just be forever.. again..nice deeper emotions

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