Sweet Melody Poem by Theany Ouy

Sweet Melody

Rating: 5.0


Beyond the horizon,
A new love begins.
Remedy of a sweet melody..
One heart sings.

A tune of grace,
Our heart dances..
To the rhythm of our souls
With every moment of our chances.

It feels like heaven,
A love so true..
An endless world
Made just for me and you.

The tune continues,
As we embrace.
Leaving memories that will last,
For our children to trace.

Now the world is in our hands,
As our hearts become one.
A promise for life,
My commitment has begun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 07 December 2007

wow i love this poem. its incredible. i love it!

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 21 May 2010

Here you go...having this delightful tone of the soul..nice one Thea.. I like the last two lines...

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John Knight 22 May 2010

Hi Theany - Lovely name - Lovely Poem - Lovely Poet. I love the structure - 5 quatrains - nice rhythm and consisten rhyme pattern x a x a then x b x b etc. The poem has excellent folw and is lovely to recite (always the critria of a good poem! ! !) . New Love is like a melody and we always feel like dancing when it happens. 'A love so true - Made just for me and you'. This is so so emotive - embracing - memories - two hearts as one - promise for life - commitment. Thanks for sharing - love though poetry - JOHN.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 26 May 2010

A panacea from a sweet heart.

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Terry Craddock 25 February 2016

Love Waits Beyond The Horizon over dreamscape horizon in the land of new possibilities where we can create new lives where anything can happen if we will it into being realities landscape seascape skies clouds we are free to choose the pattern love laughter can rain down from skies all hearts can dance sing sweet melodies Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Sweet Melody' by the poet Theany Ouy. Dedicated to the poet Theany Ouy.

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Terry Craddock 25 February 2016

'Beyond the horizon, A new love begins.' over the horizon, in the land of new possibilities, where we can create new lives, where anything can happen, if we will it into being

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Terence Craddock 06 February 2024

I wrote the poem 'Love Waits Beyond The Horizon' and split image 'Love Laughter Can Rain Down From Skies', inspired by the poem 'Sweet Melody', by the poet Theany Ouy and dedicated to Theany Ouy.

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Antonio Liao 20 May 2014

just as rain dried in the middle of the night, your pen capture the moist of the wisdom i felt, a wonderful poem i ever read...God bless a 10/10

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Neela Nath Das 16 May 2014

Love is here going to be reared in the garden of innocence.Ecstasy is its fundamental mood.Loved.Another 10.

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

beautiful write...filled with hope and emotion....blessings

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