Treasure Island

Theany Ouy


Sweet Melody


Beyond the horizon,
A new love begins.
Remedy of a sweet melody..
One heart sings.

A tune of grace,
Our heart dances..
To the rhythm of our souls
With every moment of our chances.

It feels like heaven,
A love so true..
An endless world
Made just for me and you.

The tune continues,
As we embrace.
Leaving memories that will last,
For our children to trace.

Now the world is in our hands,
As our hearts become one.
A promise for life,
My commitment has begun.

Submitted: Sunday, November 25, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

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  • Antonio Liao (5/20/2014 7:43:00 AM)

    just as rain dried in the middle of the night, your pen capture the moist of the wisdom i felt, a wonderful poem i ever read...God bless a 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (5/16/2014 8:12:00 PM)

    Love is here going to be reared in the garden of innocence.Ecstasy is its fundamental mood.Loved.Another 10. (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (10/29/2011 4:48:00 AM)

    nice. it give love a divine feel. soul is dancing and singing with the rhythem of your poem. melodious poem written by a sweet heart! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (5/22/2010 5:49:00 PM)

    Hi Theany - Lovely name - Lovely Poem - Lovely Poet. I love the structure - 5 quatrains - nice rhythm and consisten rhyme pattern x a x a then x b x b etc. The poem has excellent folw and is lovely to recite (always the critria of a good poem! ! !) . New Love is like a melody and we always feel like dancing when it happens. 'A love so true - Made just for me and you'. This is so so emotive - embracing - memories - two hearts as one - promise for life - commitment. Thanks for sharing - love though poetry - JOHN. (Report) Reply

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