Sanjay Mehta

Rookie - 76 Points (14-03-1967 / Nagrota Bagwan)

Nature' S Kindergarten - Poem by Sanjay Mehta

Deep, blue sky,
Overcast
With clouds white.
Gentle breeze
Kissing the branches, trees, leaves
And the nascent buds in between
Caressing
The concrete crust.

Stronger it blows
Trees take to the floor
Branches conduct the choir
White to grey
Synergy high
Bang the floor
Dance
To tunes of thunder
Lightening strikes
In the milieu
Pours the virile
The entire show
In silence bids bye.


Comments about Nature' S Kindergarten by Sanjay Mehta

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (10/12/2012 8:10:00 AM)

    Nature is the best mother who with her cascade of beauty can nurture her children. A wonderful write Mr.Mehta.10+++ (Report) Reply

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  • Marieta Maglas (10/1/2012 6:17:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing.10. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (9/30/2012 11:16:00 PM)

    Nature in a variety of moods is beautifully portrayed! An enjoyable read! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (9/29/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    beautiful compose n to read also (Report) Reply

  • Shivani Gupta Shivani Gupta (9/28/2012 2:44:00 PM)

    Nature's beauty is completely captured in so few words..simple and sweet.. (Report) Reply

  • Sania Bashir Sania Bashir (9/27/2012 10:19:00 AM)

    fantaboulus...simple n sweet... (Report) Reply

  • Payal Parande (9/26/2012 10:09:00 AM)

    how beautiful, fantastic, and well pinned, i see every comment start with it and why shouldn't they start with this words this poem deserve each word and so more..really sir you have described each element of nature so delicately which makes this piece fascinating and phenomenal.....i am in awe
    thank you so much for sharing
    love
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Apphia Garcia (9/25/2012 7:42:00 PM)

    absolutely beautiful i like the construction the pace of the poem and the rhythm. very nice piece to read (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Hsi (9/25/2012 11:58:00 AM)

    Carefully chosen words, in a vivid description of nature's interplay. A very nice poem, thanks! (Report) Reply

  • V S (9/25/2012 6:44:00 AM)

    the nature is seen from different perspective and it is well penned! Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Indranil Bhaduri Indranil Bhaduri (9/25/2012 3:07:00 AM)

    Fantastic...Every line touches me. Great job. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, October 1, 2012


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