Sanjay Mehta

Rookie - 0 Points (14-03-1967 / Nagrota Bagwan)

Subtle Fight


Unwind
From stone age
To present times
A subtle fight
With the might of time.

As was then
Hasn't changed
Million years hence
Still, a subtle fight
With the might of time.

Has held that state
Which our ancestors faced
A character
Which has
The entire humanity dazed.

Still, a subtle fight
With the might of time
Though
All endeavours
Of humanity have failed.

Submitted: Friday, October 19, 2012
Edited: Friday, October 19, 2012

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  • Silver Star - 9,962 Points Soulful Heart (12/10/2012 12:55:00 AM)

    That's unwinding the saga of humanity against all adversities and more.............................great work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (10/21/2012 6:38:00 AM)

    We can`t call it a mission impossible, we are standing confounded and less spirited on the pavement of these happenings of diametrically polar identities. An optimistic note from any of us can reverse the situation either. It is yet another gem of your poetic concerns.Well written Mr Mehta. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 88 Points Payal Parande (10/20/2012 2:10:00 PM)

    having a steady flow of words with a truth..a perfect poem indeed

    thank you for sharing sir
    love
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (10/19/2012 11:46:00 PM)

    Really war and strife is as old as human civilization. So many great personalities came but no one was able to stop it for good and make all dogmas and races as one. We wonder about our future. Beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,337 Points Neela Nath (10/19/2012 11:42:00 PM)

    We can't fight against time and predestined future, yet we brag of our futile power. Thanks for inviting. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/19/2012 6:24:00 AM)

    In the final end it will all be futile
    We can shruge our shoulders
    and either give up or go on like nothing will ever change
    I will choose the latter.
    Very good poem Sanjay. Makes one ponder the bleak
    future of mankind. (Report) Reply

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