Treasure Island

Donnie Wolff

No Lemon

Your eyes as the loss of ill timed fate.

Your voice as the soft sensual heartbreak.

Your tears as the time of have never been.

Your smile as the thought I think to see again.

Your hands as untouched as your soul appears to be.

I think your beautiful and amazing...

could I have a large ice tea.

Submitted: Monday, January 09, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?

Topic(s): Love

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem


Comments about this poem (No Lemon by Donnie Wolff )

Enter the verification code :

  • Toni Bjorgansen (9/19/2014 11:24:00 PM)

    The last part was very clever. As someone else said, the bait and switch technique was very well done. (Report) Reply

  • Sara Fielder (4/30/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    This is my favorite of yours...say what you will but I just love the bait and switch technique you used here. I hope you are still writing. (Report) Reply

  • (De Va) (1/11/2012 4:26:00 PM)

    This is wonderful.......I do so love this, and.....please....pass me another ice tea.....hehe... (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »

New Poems

  1. Antidepressants, Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
  2. Eve of Destruction (2014), Anthony Di'anno
  3. ! Struck by the Oner, Alice Vedral Rivera
  4. Haiku 12, Suresh Dogra
  5. A Shoulder To Cry On, Joe Rosochacki
  6. The moment you, gajanan mishra
  7. Qoute # 6, Is It Poetry
  8. Animal Factory, Dasia Deas
  9. I am happy, hasmukh amathalal
  10. A curse and legend story., Gangadharan nair Pulingat..

Poem of the Day

poet Edmund Spenser

My love is like to ice, and I to fire:
How comes it then that this her cold so great
Is not dissolved through my so hot desire,
But harder grows the more I her entreat?
...... Read complete »


Trending Poems

  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  4. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  5. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  6. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  8. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. My Love Is Like To Ice, Edmund Spenser
  10. If, Rudyard Kipling

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]