Donnie Wolff


No Lemon - Poem by Donnie Wolff

Your eyes as the loss of ill timed fate.

Your voice as the soft sensual heartbreak.

Your tears as the time of have never been.

Your smile as the thought I think to see again.

Your hands as untouched as your soul appears to be.

I think your beautiful and amazing...

could I have a large ice tea.


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Comments about No Lemon by Donnie Wolff

  • Rookie - 22 Points Toni Bjorgansen (9/19/2014 11:24:00 PM)

    The last part was very clever. As someone else said, the bait and switch technique was very well done. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 184 Points Brian Jani (5/24/2014 10:59:00 AM)

    Nice poem Lonnie I love it (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 613 Points Sara Fielder (4/30/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    This is my favorite of yours...say what you will but I just love the bait and switch technique you used here. I hope you are still writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (1/11/2012 4:26:00 PM)

    This is wonderful.......I do so love this, and.....please....pass me another ice tea.....hehe... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 9, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 1, 2014


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