No Place Like Home Poem by Rununah S...

No Place Like Home



When your somewhere
like at a friends house
and you can't do what you
do at home. You whisper
'This is no place like home'

Sometimes life isn't
easy not being around
your house a lot.

When I'm at school
that's when I always say
This is nothing like my home.
My home is funnier and better.

School is nothing like
your home because you
basically sit all day and work.

My home is my best friend.
I can do whatever except
mess it up and flip it upside down.

Your cousins house
can be totally different
from yours.

My house can be funnier
and better for others.
Don't fuss and start to CUSS
and your home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mcmahon 10 August 2009

If your not going to think harder these peoms canny work, there is a lot more heart in home, cousin? family, and be creative you got the right idea, almost clever but it could have been more add more heart and add a clever line randomly clever lines make good reading

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