Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Rookie - 0 Points (21/8/1998 / Cochin(India))

No Wink...........No Blink - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

I saw it on the top shelf
When I went to the toy store
I thought that it was sleeping
But how come it did not snore
I thought I will ask it what it was
So first I gave it a wink
But it did'nt do anything
I t did'nt even blink
So I had to call my mother
In her hand was a football
She said now don't you be foolish
Risha......that is a doll.

Comments about No Wink...........No Blink by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • (12/27/2008 8:29:00 PM)

    funny...you also tried to incorperate some rhyme into your poem...well done...
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  • (3/27/2007 11:17:00 AM)

    Lovely poem Risha, I enjoyed it very much! !
    Love and Hugs,
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  • Mahfooz Ali (3/27/2007 9:14:00 AM)

    Hello, Risha Beta, what a nice poem u ve written. I ve become fan of urs. Bye with lots of Love.


    Mahfooz Uncle.
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  • (3/27/2007 9:12:00 AM)

    This is lovely Risha, you are a very talented young lady. Top marks from me too.
    Anna xxx
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  • (3/27/2007 9:05:00 AM)

    Risha, what a sweet poem. I just love the subtle humor you include in some of your poems. This one made me smile. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it Princess.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, February 7, 2011

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