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Nostalgia

Among palm fronds and paddy fields
Stands veiled an ancient structure
Erstwhile the abode of innocence and ease
A house now left empty of its throng
Sheltering a happy brood, once it throbbed and thrived
Within whose walls, we were born and bred
Crying and whining, laughing and prattling
Pampered and cared, we grew as kids
Corrected and controlled, we grew into adults
Here we shared a thousand mingled thoughts
A hundred hopes, dreams and fears
Saw the dawn of placid summer morns
And the descent of cold winter nights.

With hurrying feet as Time treaded past
Migrated we to new terrains and climes
Like young birds out from their nests depart
To wider skies and heady heights.

Sweet home! Earthly haven!
Harbour us once more under thy roof
To soothe the turbulent hearts into peaceful stillness
To quench the wayward fancy to curl into primordial lineage
To relish once again that Arcadian bliss
And to splice together the snapped up ties.

But Oh! The love of our parents
Can it be retrieved?
They sleep content within their cold alabaster cells
Will they come and flit unseen
To shower their benediction on us
Begotten of their flesh?

As my limp feet tread the land unwilling
The past undulates and memories stretch incessant
My moist eyes hold back the flood of grief
To see thy glory fled, thy grandeur vanished
The neat courtyard where we romped and played
Now overgrown with thistles and thorny plants!
Lo! Under the Jamun tree, lie un gathered
Black glossy succulent fruits
Gone rotten in scattered heaps!

Time elapses, wrought with change
Change! Nature's irreversible law
The joy that we had in times of yore
Far surpasses the sheen of new opulence and pomp

Around the hearth where Mother blew the flame alive
We sat cuddled round on December morns
Watching lazily the wisps of smoke
Curling up from the damp piece of half burnt wood
And ate the ‘rotis' right from the pan

Now we have kitchens of gleaming chrome
Costly gadgets and neat tiled hearths
But the food we eat tastes so bland
Lacking something of that homely fare
Richly spiced with maternal love
And served hot from pots blackened by the flames

On hot summer days, we helped our father
A tiller of soil who loved his toil
Carry dried bales of hay
For the milking cows and their tawny calves
Who gave us pails of milk and curd
And heaps of cow dung for our fields.

Memories come clamouring down
Like the lash of cascading rain

Here, I stand transfixed,
An alien,
At the threshold of my own home
Visited by recollections sweet and sour
Hesitant to encounter the unpalatable truth
That the pleasant fields I once walked over
And the old familiar faces, I love to look on
Are gone!
Gone forever, never to return.

Submitted: Friday, July 27, 2012


Comments about this poem (Nostalgia by Valsa George )

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  • * Sunprincess * (1/7/2013 2:26:00 PM)

    a beautiful write and thank you for sharing the memories of your
    childhood this is very special and i fell blessed you shared with us.
    this write speaks so very well of childhood and it is not how much
    you have or own in life.. but spending time together as a family which
    is most important..

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  • Joseph Anderson (8/24/2012 12:44:00 PM)

    An enjoyable romp through the past, where I now dwell. I sure did enjoy this and wondered if you had as little
    of the material things as I. this was an endearing journey, so well told. I have one with same title.
    Thanks for yhe memories

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  • Elizabeth Kurian Mona (8/10/2012 3:09:00 AM)

    Lovely word pictures of the bygone days of chilhood spent in one's own land coming alive in memories!
    Elizabeth K. Mona

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  • Diane Hine (8/3/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    A richly detailed picture of a happy childhood, very enjoyable to read.

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  • Valerie Dohren (7/30/2012 1:31:00 PM)

    But such memories will always be there in our hearts and minds to recall at will - a beautiful write Valsa.

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