O Love! I Know All That Poem by Akhtar Jawad

O Love! I Know All That

Rating: 2.8


I never melted alone in love,
mountains melted with me,
I never fell alone in love,
falls slowly descended with me,
I never slipped in love alone,
rivers slipped with me,
I didn't lost my identity alone in love,
a river lost her identity with me,
O love! I know all that,
still I rise with the clouds
to be frozen in the loneliness of the mountains!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 19 October 2018

Lovely poem. Nature of love demands of the love of nature. The idea has nicely been expressed. Even the loneliness will come as an advantage. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 19 October 2018

What a wonderful poem on behalf of a lover who finds justifiable reasons for his fall, Loved it Janab,11+++ and welcome back to the LOVE topic.

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Rini Shibu 19 October 2018

To be frozen in the loneliness of the mountain..amazing

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Bharati Nayak 21 October 2018

I never melted alone in love, mountains melted with me, I never fell alone in love, falls slowly descended with me, I never slipped in love alone, rivers slipped with me, - - - - The intensity of the lover's feeling in loneliness so poetically expressed.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2018

Beautifully expressed, Akhtar Sahab, the frozen feeling of loneliness through mountains, rivers and water falls. Even amidst the bountiful nature, how lonely can you feel. Wonderful imagery........10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2018

Melting in love means a lot with beauty of hope and joy. A great perceptional poem you have shared and I am glad to revisit. I give you full 10 marks as usual I give you always...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2018

What a wonderful imaginary! I cite... I didn't lost my identity alone in love, a river lost her identity with me, Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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Ruby Mostazir 19 October 2018

Such a lovely poem... :)

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