Oh Lovely Eve An All Time Need Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Oh Lovely Eve An All Time Need

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May I make a pen picture?
I've seen you, though not seen.
Don't get worried, not a lecture,
Just a poem, neat and clean.

Sometimes I think,
You're like my mother,
Stern but loving, for me she was pink,
Protecting myself, may be whatever.

Sometimes I think,
You're like a sister,
Helping in assignments making me shrink,
Relieving my fever.

Sometimes I think,
You're like a daughter,
Always worried for, remaining in link,
With a sick father and a sick mother.

Oh lovely Eve! an an all time need,
Adam can't survive without your beauty,
Beauty of your feeding, yes indeed,
Beauty of mother's fatigue and duty.

Oh lovely Eve! an an all time need,
The helping sister, the help you provide,
Beauty of your help, yes indeed,
A mother inside.

Oh lovely Eve! an an all time need,
The serving daughter, the service sponsor,
Beauty of your service, service indeed,
No simile, no metaphor.

Oh lovely Eve! an an all time need,
You are a friend, linked on computer,
See you in your poems when I read,
Wish when I meet you, see you greater!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Being pleased by a poetess encouraging a new poet like me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 19 September 2014

A beautiful poem on Eve.

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