On The Rise Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
On The Rise
Here a man immures in a lonely island
Sans sword, sans cuirass and sans crown
Like a dethroned king from his kingdom.
He was banished from his castle of thoughts,
By the deeds of the people around him.
They marooned him in a morass isle.
The innate abilities enthroned him as a King
He worshiped truth and justice in his tenure
And crusaded for purity with his prowess.
The benevolent philanthropist loved,
His impecunious people by giving them
The incomputable wealth of his wisdom
That dwelt in the spence of his heart
They genuflected him for his generosity
And enshrined him in their heart's shrine.
He shined in his white ermine cloth
When oscultated them from his heart's pulpit
The hail of people surged and echoed there.
His path adorned with crimson carpet
He recited a canticle of his magnum opus
Then a lovely filly bestowed him a rose
He felt as he was in the seventh paradise.
Eloquence of his words brought many to him
The emperors became his cronies.
He was appreciated by his craftness of words
He swept away the worry of the people
An ornamented chair of love he was adorned
In the heart of the people around him.
But that man was marooned by the same people
To a land of hatred and cruelty
To a desert of worries
But he wish to come again to his throne
To regain the regality of thoughts,
To love his unthankful people once again.
very great poem you written and is different from what I read. very fanastic job :)
Very well said....with words on the rise of temperatue to the flair of poetry..every good thing is assumed to be warm with a welcome..yours came as the coffee freshly brewed..well done again..
Truth and purity, generosity and philanthropy, these will bring us on the rise, no matter where we are now. This poem can be a source of inspiration for everyone who reads it. Simply brilliant. Keep it up, Vipins.
'of his heart's eyrie-pulpit of love. Then the hail of people surged and echoed everywhere. His path adorned with crimson-coloured carpet and cavaliers followed him.' Lit by the noble passion, the poet has written this impressive poem I think. I can see a philosopher in him. The racy narration is keeps the engages any reader. Hats off to your work vipins....
you are another Langston hughes, another Khalil gibran, but most of all a young shakespeare in telling the tale of a man with a heart only few and many came to respect... you are a great story teller...thanks for sharing...my view was of it sooooooooooo colorful and that is what took me on your jouney...
Good poem Vipins. You are indeed very articulate and use language fully for it's beautiful sounds.
Enjoyable to read and interesting projections I think this is a very good poem... Thanks for the invitation.... Jim Troy
The rise of your talent marked, studded in the rise of this poem...Well done Vipin Write write write coz talent in you want to rise above the height_Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Very interesting story, here. It's very well threaded within this poem. I love this one, keep on writing masterpieces like this.