Organs Poem by Katherine Pinero
Organs
My heart is pounding, my mind is knocking it's doors
Saying, hey fool! Have you decided, who's who?
Love is never a good thing for me never had it at school.
Heart replies with a beat, I love him so much, didn't you know?
Eyes began to say, but I can't see why you love him so,
But I can see it in his eyes, it's perception I suppose.
'He never holds me, nor ever touches me once.
Yet, I feel him in your wildest dreams', arms began to talk.
Oh come on guys, It's love can't you feel?
It's the only thing that keeps us alive if it's real, Heart insist.
Nothing is real, feet confront, You only have me,
Yet your flying without wings, don't get deceived.
Ok stop the quarrel, I love him and I love myself
If we all unite what would it be then? .
The judgement would be based upon the one who is judged,
But anyway Love him because we love you.
Again, there is a lot of poetic talent in this composition. But I would expect the English to be more lucid, because there are parts I do not understand clearly. I know that you are young, but don't give your heart to anyone at that age. Because 18 is the age of infatuation; infatuation is something that is a 'passing shower', it comes and goes. And it comes very strongly in adolescence. Good song writer, hone your poetic skills. But beware of giving your heart to anyone. If you want to give your heart to one, give it to the Lord Jesus Christ. He will take care of it for you.
nice effort to bring the importance heart among organs. 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 1:41:05 AM # 1.0.0.1119
love makes you fly without wings......... wonderful expression of the inner joy and you express truly what love is at a very young age. thank you dear poetess. tony