Out Of Body Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Out Of Body



Relapsing into a coma of sorts, only this time on purpose,
in a design, just trying to replicate what happened before.

Many concepts and puzzle pictures are forming a picture of
unanimous decisions, contouring themselves to coded rhythms.

Precious, priceless and treasured with this interior atmos-
phere where they're nourished, grown and blossom.

Wonder and thought joining curiosity in depths of intellect,
voicing melodies and harmonies of distant equations.

Always analyzing chemical formulas, bringing self into this
coma-like stupor to find it's answers, wanting to know how
it happened.

Not liking the fact that I didn't know anything, being out
of body and gone, just looking down at myself then finding
myself in heaven.

Friday, December 26, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 26 December 2014

Concepts divert and puzzle come while observing out of body state during coma. Wonderful poem on basic truth of life. Only in this period a patient can explain about death experiences.

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Patricia Grantham 26 December 2014

A very interesting and creative write. An out of body experience expressed in good details. Nice.

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