Poem Needs A Home Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Poem Needs A Home

Rating: 5.0


Wayward in unjust life.
Tossed with all strife.
Here my noise on a page.
Maybe to come of age.
Another poem next to me.
Now Im not alone and free.
Many noise poems with me.
Here on the page to see.
What is that noise.
Another poem from the coys.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted Sheridan 08 May 2008

It is true, therein lies the problem we all have. everybody is a poet but doesn't know it.

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~ Jon London ~ 19 May 2008

So true, many of us will share the same thought. Nicely penned Poewhit. best wishes Jon.

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Pied Piper Berry 27 August 2008

I like this..... It flows very well and I enjoyed it.. Good write!

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Marilyn Lott 19 September 2008

That is so true, Joseph! So much goes on within the poet/writer with so many thoughts that just daily life alone evokes. Keep writing and posting. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Ivor Hogg 19 September 2008

You have a unique style my friend full of rhymes and yet discordant at the same time. I have read several of your poems and will read more later I am an old fashioned formalist still attempting to come to grips wityh free form

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2009

Many noise poems with me. Here on the page to see. What is that noise. Another poem from the coys....very well said and done.. it needs recognition and well place home in page....10 read mine number one.. can i reach on top

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 August 2009

The use of the word coys made me to think. Interesting piece.

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Fiona Davidson 13 January 2009

Excellent poem Joe...enjoyed reading it....thank you

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Albert Wong 27 October 2008

A wonderful poem with a nice title +10.

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Jester's P 23 October 2008

...needs a home is already enough to convey a message of 'life'- the need not just to live in a house but to at home. nice

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