Valsa George

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Bitten by a love bug,
My heart swells with oedema
My love, like gnawing anxiety,
Burdens me
Like a knotty noose,
Stifles me
Like a watch dog,
Follows me

Like an inalienable shadow,
Always with me!
When I turn around,
It is right behind!
It lingers in me
Like a lovely metaphor
Like the intoxicating smell
Of the first summer rain

In my world there are only two of us;
You and I
Where ever I go,
The world wears your face.
A face I have never seen!

I don’t know where you are
In which alien shore you dwell

Yet I write this message,
In secret code
Pouring out my longings,
My unuttered love,
My invisible desires,
Into this scroll of paper
In cursive, indelible ink
I seal it in a bottle
With no address on
And let it drift over the currents

It is meant for the one
Who finds it
And thinks it is for him

If you feel, it is not for you,
Please don’t throw it as garbage;
Kindly put it back,
And let my love vessel float,
Over eddies and currents
Because my soul is encased within!

Just know this much;
It is from a lovely lass!

Submitted: Saturday, August 31, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 03, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 15,683 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/6/2015 12:54:00 PM)

    This is very very outstanding indeed penned with so much emotions.........Valsa.......great write...10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,273 Points Akhtar Jawad (11/7/2014 4:48:00 AM)

    An Urdu poet Jigar Muradabadi says: -
    Mera paigham muhabbat hay jahn tak pahunche - My message is love as long as it can reach.
    A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 442 Points Yasmeen Khan (9/12/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    Wow! 'lovely lass' and 'soul encased'....I loved it dear Val. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,405 Points Diane Hine (9/5/2013 8:39:00 PM)

    It's a good thing the love bug is curable or we'd never survive.
    I love this poem Valsa and it's going on my favourites list! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,223 Points Anthony Di''anno (9/5/2013 1:35:00 PM)

    Beautiful Valsa. Who could throw back a bottle filled with so much beauty and love? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,342 Points Patricia Grantham (9/5/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    Only a love so deep would make a person move to the point
    of addressing a love letter so profound, put it in a bottle and let
    it flow over the currents that moves it over the oceans until it rests
    in the hands of someone that awaits the love that that is so freely
    given. Lucky one he is that receives it. An inspiring write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points David Wood (9/3/2013 5:05:00 AM)

    A delightful poem full of emotion, a god write Valsa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Akshaya Pawasker (9/1/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    love that stiffles burdens and follows you everywhere captured in a bottle and sealed to fall in the right hands.lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,898 Points Hazel Durham (9/1/2013 8:56:00 AM)

    All your emotions beautifully bound with desires unfolding in a letter to your soulmate, who is out there waiting for you!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,344 Points Hans Vr (9/1/2013 6:52:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem full of feeling.
    Very well written (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/1/2013 1:40:00 AM)

    Then it is for every one a universal read your work ma'am marvellous so tasty dish u offered at PH to share can't be explained thank u (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,744 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/31/2013 10:38:00 PM)

    Message of Unuttered love and invisible desires in indelible ink sent in a bottle. Beautifully stated. Bottle awaited. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/31/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    a gentleman, a poet, a dreamer, a lonely fellow, always hopeful of romance and adventure.
    bravo ma'am a tell well told (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Heather Wilkins (8/31/2013 12:05:00 PM)

    just know this much it is from a lovely lass. nice (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Dinesh Nair (8/31/2013 7:42:00 AM)

    Hope the sealed bottle will drift on till the eligible hands lift it up from the currents. The lovely lass may soon find her lover reading the sweet nothings whispered unto his keen ears. Meanwhile till the letter reaches the shore of acceptance let us assume the love vessel will be whispering about the blissful pain of this waiting the lass experiences. A missed opportunity has been put on the canvas here by Madam Valsa too! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (8/31/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    An enjoyable read. Texture of romance in a novel style. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (8/31/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    An enjoyable read. Texture of romance in a novel style. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/31/2013 5:22:00 AM)

    Yes, Valsa I got your vessel, but I put it back so that it reaches the right hand...Really the poem is very beautiful...You could write so beautifully, really I find it so difficulty in writing this way....Each time I find myself landed in a pool of Sorry Vessel especially after posting a poem..As my vessel doesn't reach where it is suppose to. It often lands in wrong hands....And I just tells sorry.I don't know when I will post a Lovely vessel like you...

    Really Loved reading it. Waiting for next.... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 687 Points Kavya . (8/31/2013 1:27:00 AM)

    oh wat a lovely poem Mam! enjoyed every line! (Report) Reply

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