Power Unlimited Poem by Fay Slimm

Power Unlimited

Rating: 4.9


Feral winds of unimaginable change
Blow into our days at will, reminding
Us, love can be blind. Fate rearranges
Strangely shaped new ties, unbinding
Strong loyalties previously held, drawing
Us, mercilessly into fresh fields that
If not controlled drive us wild. Dried out shore
Of our heart feels the tide of shattering
Breakers storming toward us with yearnings
For love which submerge us. Unlimited
Power, like electrical force, confirms
It is so, and transforms us.. Grids emitting
Energy for a while, then breaking down,
Are no match for this. Love's power is renowned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

nice form.. the form normally don't take on such power. but you made it! wow!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 June 2009

Powerful and sharp composition

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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

informative and highly significant to one and all, , ideas are nicely set, fine write..10++

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Sandra Martyres 10 June 2009

A very powerful piece Fay...10+

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the force keeping the world in balance as per science is the force of attraction..finding love in that attraction makes human sense

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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