Brian Purdy

Rookie - 0 Points (28.09.48 / Belleville, Ontario)

Puzzled - Poem by Brian Purdy

Puzzled, I am
By the tepid response
Of those on whom I depended.
Must I walk alone this moonlit path
Stubbing my toes on crooked roots
Dislodging pebbles which signal my lonely passage?

Who guesses my destination
And waits my arrival? What angels watch,
While offering, like fitful stars,
Provision against these shadows,
Solace for my human faults?

And if my billy is empty
Yet still, I limber my sinews,
Contrive a liquid song to match my steps.
Tomorrow shall know my name - this I promise.

As for those who have failed me
As I in my life let others down - don't worry.
We each have opportunities
To offer familiar travelers food and lodging
But let those false-faced ones be sure
I read their names along this route - am not deluded.


Comments about Puzzled by Brian Purdy

  • Silver Star - 4,000 Points Valerie Dohren (5/2/2012 1:58:00 PM)

    Very well written piece on everyone's passage through life. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points C. Cruz (4/8/2012 10:19:00 PM)

    Nice construction Brian. Puzzled Not! Thanks also for the inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 613 Points Sara Fielder (3/27/2012 3:49:00 AM)

    I'm stunned. This is what they call poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (3/20/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    Ioneliness and search tangled into a song sad...........poetic lyrics stirring the chords unknown
    People and people around,
    Yet every soul a lonely creature.
    Lost in the maze of blogs and electronic mound,
    But yet to find a loving heart to nurture. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (3/20/2012 1:19:00 PM)

    very sad and lonely poem, inner expression is depicted well, a very good poem i like it, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, April 9, 2012


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