Raveendran N.V.

! ! ! Rain Rime - Poem by Raveendran N.V.

Ray ray ray ray ray ray
T- ray t –ray t- ray t- ray
Tray- tray tray- tray tray- tray
T- rain t- rain t- rain t- rain
Train- rain train- rain train- rain
To rain to rain to rain to rain
T- rhine t- rhine t- rhine t- rhine
To rhine to rhine to rhine to rhine
T- rhyme t- rhyme t -rhyme t- rhyme
To rhine to rhyme to rhine to rhyme
Train to rhine to rain to rhyme
Train to rhine to rain to rhyme

Comments about ! ! ! Rain Rime by Raveendran N.V.

  • Rookie Nikunj Sharma (6/26/2009 4:29:00 AM)

    different and sweet.... wow..........pls read my poems called MY DREAM and BOOKMARK. shall be grateful for your comments (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,650 Points john tiong chunghoo (1/11/2009 6:48:00 AM)

    what a lovely sound

    my haiku for you

    uner the streetlight
    a million ballet dancers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Uyanga Togoontumur (4/7/2008 11:13:00 PM)

    Well done! Very interesting write! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 565 Points Subbaraman N V (12/24/2007 1:24:00 AM)

    Very nice! Lovely write! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 25, 2011

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