Reaching Out. Poem by Fay Slimm

Reaching Out.

Rating: 5.0


In the throes of our love
.................................I became alive.
The lamp of my soul
.................... still lights well my way.
Reaching out to our star
................................ I find on arrival
The mem'ry of you
.............................invites me to stay.

Forasmuch as you gave
........................fresh meaning to life
And taught me what only
.......................... freedom can bring,
I salute you with warmth
...................... dear friend, as rightly
You stay ever close,
........ you, who made my heart sing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lalitha iyer 07 October 2009

In brief it is touching.................................

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Bob Gibson 08 October 2009

Your sunshine on a cloudy day a shinning light to show the way your warmth melts hearts it cannot see your poems are pure ecstasy

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Georgia Girl 07 October 2009

So beautiful, sounds like a wonderful friendship...such beautiful verses..10

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Lynda Robson 07 October 2009

Heartfelt words Fay, 'you who made my heart sing' how lovely........ 10 Lynda xx

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Ian Bowen 07 October 2009

Fay, nice piece of work. Loved the layout, and of course the content.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Carol Gall 07 October 2009

beautiful fay you write the best love poems 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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