Michelle Kafka

Rookie (Manitoba, Canada)

Red rain


Fire engine rose petals ebb
Persimmon embers die down
Sultry cerise lips pout
Red wine hungrily consumed
Passionate amaranth whispers float on the breeze
Silky sangria dress plummets
Pink lace dips
Ruby ripe fruits slope
Hard heated crimson blood flows
Cheeks blush rose
Venetian lamps blink out
Scarlet satin sheets spill
Flame hair tumbles
Red omamoni falls from fingertips
Male aura plunges female's aura
Vermillion, coral, and persian sunset mingle casting a soft glow on two united red auras
Male and female auras see and sound red.

Submitted: Saturday, August 15, 2009

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  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (9/5/2009 2:20:00 AM)

    Fire engine rose petals ebb
    Persimmon embers die down
    Sultry cerise lips pout
    Red wine hungrily consumed

    what a sweet poem is this one and the composition of wrds are giving multiples meanings to your verses you combined here..the flwo is good but the idea is again deep and deep way tocuhing one..well done.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 971 Points Marieta Maglas (8/30/2009 12:42:00 PM)

    nice poem, well penned with deep ideas................10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michelle Kafka (8/20/2009 10:01:00 PM)

    Lol poetry is art indeed. Just took a bow. Thanks for the comment Patrick. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patrick A. Martin (8/16/2009 9:02:00 PM)

    Ah ha! and who said poetry was not art. Take a bow Michelle brilliant (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michelle Kafka (8/15/2009 6:34:00 PM)

    Thank you for your comments. This poem was inspired by nature's red rain and an artist friend - Brodi Surrealist's colour choice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Varanasi Ramabrahmam (8/15/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    Very beautiful and romantic description of the blissful union. Pleasant sensuality oozing from the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (8/15/2009 7:15:00 AM)

    Vermillion, coral, and persian sunset mingle casting a soft glow on two united red...........
    ..
    unequaled matrix of hearts in unison
    as blue sky by the glow of full moon.............wonderful portray of sweet love in paints of color scintillating, ingeniously wrought by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (8/15/2009 3:16:00 AM)

    Red omamoni falls from fingertips
    Male aura plunges female's aura
    Vermillion, coral, and persian sunset mingle casting a soft glow on two united red auras
    Male and female auras see and sound red.

    sweet very sweet poem, the way you expressed it is really heartfelt and meaningful enough..idea is thoughful and the composition is very much sweet..well done and like the way you write, , hope you never stop writing..best of luck (Report) Reply

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