Raymond Valadez

Rookie (12-21-1982 / Mexico)

Remember Me Please - Poem by Raymond Valadez

If one day you ever care to see me
remember me remember me

remember my eyes
when you see some one suffering from love and all they do is cry
remember my lips, when you take the sweetest sip
remember my words my love every day
like in the mornings when you hear the doves sing so gay
remember my smile
exactly like a 8 year old child smiles
remember my body
when you hug your pillow to whisper you love me
remember me when I use to travel every inch of your body
remember me when I fell in your heart and you found me
remember that your lips where all I ever wanted to drink
remember that your eyes where all I ever wanted to see
next to you the only place I wanted to be
remember me please....
when I begged you so you wouldn’t leave

remember when I was inside of your heart
and nothing in this world could break us apart

remember me

Comments about Remember Me Please by Raymond Valadez

  • Rookie Kerry green evil becomes her (2/5/2010 8:41:00 PM)

    wow this a sad but lovely poem im not really one for the love poems but i think your poem is great (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Amy J-Jordan (2/5/2010 6:41:00 PM)

    I can feel the urgency and desperation. I absolutely love it to pieces! You need to write music to it, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 6, 2010

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