Revelations, Sobering Poem by Rani Turton

Revelations, Sobering

Rating: 5.0


I was only one more pebble on the shore.
I was only one more star in the sky.
When the eternal wind, cosmic or terrestrial
Stellar or sober, blew, blew like the last call
I was the cosmic dust and the desert gloom

The drops of rain that splatter on city sidewalks
The waves that slowly claim the beaches
The lunar tides, the birds last songs
The time to come, the moments gone by.

Glimpse this instant of life
My window is the world
The bread I eat, the hand I hold,
The love in my eyes will tell the ocean's gaze
Life has to be lived with intensity
I am one with the world's density.

Copyright: Rani Turton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 24 May 2009

Comparisons like: ''sober, blew, blew like the last call'' and extended metaphors like: ''I was the cosmic dust and the desert gloom'' make this a wonderful poem.''My window is the world'' is the key phrase of this poem.10++

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