If I should die
would I lie
or would I rise
Rise from the ashes
into the form of the Crow
To still see
into the hearts
of the ones I love
you will rise like smoke from the ashes, hanging in their hearts, as solace! short, powerful poem!
death can always bring some source of happiness to a person, thats my personally opinion good job :)
OH this is the best shot in short, you create a big impact only in small words.. :) I hope one day the crow will rise instead of dying..and the color of the feather evolved to be many as it gained from lessons when the crow was about dying...I love the line 'Rise from the ashes.....into the form of the crow'..no no i guess every line just made well..i cant pick one but whole hahahaha...Very Nice My Bro Dave! ! _Unwritten Soul
wow, very powerful idea, short poem with complex thought.Yes.it is very nice.best wishes! ! ! !
Strong in fact very strong. Read a few times to get the full impact. Excellent write Dave. Regards. Craig
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I really like this! Very moving!