Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Rising Sun - Poem by Aftab Alam

See the Sun!
‘Tis bakers' bun,
A crimson red,
With the silky thread,
To climb the fate,
For the crispy bread,
‘Tis natures pun,
For everyone,
See the sun!
A rising sun//

Clear the gun,
It reduces ton,
Birds sing and peep,
New life to keep,
A melodious song,
For wings to sleep,
You every one,
Say, it is done,
Just see the sun!
A rising sun//

Early, rise and run,
Pray, don't turn,
See, the greeting dew,
Torn fate it sew,
To make a fresh,
By heavens grace,
A branded new,
Never shun for fun,
There's loser none,
Just see the sun!
A rising sun//

Comments about Rising Sun by Aftab Alam

  • Gold Star - 5,820 Points Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (9/20/2014 7:09:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem. Really marvellous composition. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,440 Points Sallam Yassin (12/13/2013 3:46:00 PM)

    beautiful song
    for the morning
    sun (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,718 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/7/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    Rising Sun is simply beautiful. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013

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