Abdul Wahab


Roaring - Poem by Abdul Wahab

The ocean is wide
Roars in her own soul inside
With current and tide.


Comments about Roaring by Abdul Wahab

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (8/1/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    stunning job is done (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 5 Points Rizvana Parveen (3/20/2012 1:44:00 AM)

    very philosophical....n...thought provoking (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/19/2012 7:16:00 AM)

    beautiful words with in-depth meaning. bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (3/17/2012 2:08:00 AM)

    Turbulence on the surface secret something wide
    Mystical the ocean too have posses mystery inside
    Unrevealed until we dive deep to see never seen side
    Now we know discover life as we know how to get bright_UNwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (3/16/2012 2:50:00 AM)

    Holymoly, holydooly! This poem on nature simple, straight forward yet it has a divine charm or may be the charm of nature itself...

    This poem is totally different from other poems and has fresh look of the teen girl, Great going and hope that you can wrought many similar wonders on Nature, the mighty stature... the poem is rated A1! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (3/16/2012 2:48:00 AM)

    Holymoly, holydooly! This poem on nature simple, straight forward yet it has a divine charm or may be the charm of nature itself...

    This poem is totally different from other poems and has fresh look of the teen girl, Great going and hope that you can wrought many similar wonders on Nature, the mighty stature... the poem is rated A1! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (3/16/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    Congrats as you poem is there in the Legendary list of top 500, (Another poem)

    A great haiku, and hope that you can produce many Haiku's like this, Yes sky always roars with mystic speech, You conveyed well and beyond anybody else can do with mere 3 short lines! Hats of Wahabji! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,166 Points Hans Vr (3/15/2012 8:58:00 AM)

    Beautiiful Haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (3/15/2012 1:18:00 AM)

    A great Haiku I agree with Salema, good use of the metaphor and feminime in her own soul inside. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (3/15/2012 1:06:00 AM)

    A strong haiku, well done, I agree with Salema Khatun and the metaphor and the feminine for the ocean and its many powerful and complex characteristics. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (3/14/2012 8:15:00 AM)

    Ocean,
    Green or blue or iron-gray'
    As the light
    strikes you'
    Primordial flood,
    Relentless and remorseless
    Like a woman in rage.
    Mongameli Mabona's THE SEA is reminded by this short poem beautifully written... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rony Sk (3/14/2012 6:21:00 AM)

    You tell us a real thing. Thank you. I like it very much. The poem is very good.Thanks Thanks............. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (3/13/2012 8:21:00 AM)

    A really beautiful poem, a fantastic write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Herojit Philem (3/12/2012 5:13:00 AM)

    It have a great meaning...... Nice write.....! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (3/11/2012 2:14:00 PM)

    Roaring of sea
    Buzzing of bee
    All I can hear when I'm not buzy))))
    ********************
    I like your haiku......'tis a nature haiku! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Salema Khatun (3/11/2012 12:51:00 PM)

    This is a very nice haiku, the word ''roaring'' signifies a lot , in our life too...hence a good use of the metaphor.
    I like the little poem very much. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, March 30, 2012


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