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Roaring

The ocean is wide
Roars in her own soul inside
With current and tide.

Submitted: Sunday, March 11, 2012
Edited: Friday, March 30, 2012


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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/1/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    stunning job is done

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  • Rizvana Parveen (3/20/2012 1:44:00 AM)

    very philosophical....n...thought provoking

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  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/19/2012 7:16:00 AM)

    beautiful words with in-depth meaning. bravo!

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  • Unwritten Soul (3/17/2012 2:08:00 AM)

    Turbulence on the surface secret something wide
    Mystical the ocean too have posses mystery inside
    Unrevealed until we dive deep to see never seen side
    Now we know discover life as we know how to get bright_UNwritten Soul

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  • Harindhar Reddy (3/16/2012 2:50:00 AM)

    Holymoly, holydooly! This poem on nature simple, straight forward yet it has a divine charm or may be the charm of nature itself...

    This poem is totally different from other poems and has fresh look of the teen girl, Great going and hope that you can wrought many similar wonders on Nature, the mighty stature... the poem is rated A1!

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  • Harindhar Reddy (3/16/2012 2:48:00 AM)

    Holymoly, holydooly! This poem on nature simple, straight forward yet it has a divine charm or may be the charm of nature itself...

    This poem is totally different from other poems and has fresh look of the teen girl, Great going and hope that you can wrought many similar wonders on Nature, the mighty stature... the poem is rated A1!

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  • Harindhar Reddy (3/16/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    Congrats as you poem is there in the Legendary list of top 500, (Another poem)

    A great haiku, and hope that you can produce many Haiku's like this, Yes sky always roars with mystic speech, You conveyed well and beyond anybody else can do with mere 3 short lines! Hats of Wahabji!

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  • Hans Vr (3/15/2012 8:58:00 AM)

    Beautiiful Haiku.

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  • Danny Draper (3/15/2012 1:18:00 AM)

    A great Haiku I agree with Salema, good use of the metaphor and feminime in her own soul inside.

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  • Danny Draper (3/15/2012 1:06:00 AM)

    A strong haiku, well done, I agree with Salema Khatun and the metaphor and the feminine for the ocean and its many powerful and complex characteristics.

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