Let me keep you in my heart
So we will never part
Allow me to whisper you name
It keeps my feelings aflamed.
Vast as the horizon my mind whirls
Your soothing voice I surely miss
I'll toss every sadness with a sigh
I believe your words I get by.
Still I can feel the warm rain
Beyond imagination you remain
The gentle wind keeps my blues
With a smile my love unfolds.
You are certainly a great knight
You visit every dream of mine at night
In the silence of the moment my heart plays a tune
The leaves dance the birds sing they smile at the moon.
In my blood runs the passion I once forgot
Boundless love so sweet I want to shout
With the moon up high I can stay dreaming
Keeping my heart, my eyes, with love, ... beaming.
I love the setting for this love poem. Nature the perfect metaphor for love...so natural. Thanks for sharing
Beautiful and well set.I sense a longing for love and then a love lost.To me you have expressed your soul.It's very short but yet so sweet and comforting and a bit sad.
It is a very sweet poem. I like it. But I am having difficulty understanding the title....unless you were dividing it up into words...she, he, her, wins? I enjoyed the similes and the scenes you painted.
A beautiful love poem. 'In the silence of the moment my heart plays a tune The leaves dance the birds sing they smile at the moon.' These things happen when one is in love. The last stanza is simply superb! Well written. What is the meaning of the title?
yeah right! ! ! ! i've seen it.... but i haven't read all your poems yet.... i'll make time for it....atleast your thoughts is spreading, it won't get stock in your journal anymore...nice one..! ! ! !
beautiful..don't we all wish that our prince could be with us throughout the night
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice Love Poem in backdropp of Nature, ‘Still I can feel the warm rain’ finest metaphor…is it tears? ....thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10