Beach Girl


Sand In My Toes - Poem by Beach Girl

Sand in my toes
Scorched burning feet
Ran to the water
Got outta the heat

White frothy waves
Crashed over my head
Began to feel naughty
Bandeau was soon shed

Fled to my beach towel
Was freezing to death
The cold blue Pacific
Does fill one with zest


Comments about Sand In My Toes by Beach Girl

  • Silver Star - 4,164 Points Zinnia Narcissa (5/24/2015 7:32:00 PM)

    a delectable kind of piece and pleasant lines (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,454 Points Mr. Nobody (3/8/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    I have no fear of shark attack,
    what I hate about the beach,
    is sand in my crack!

    Love your fast wit in beautiful brevity (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,508 Points John Westlake (3/4/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Very beautiful. A nice vacation for my mind. Delightfully written (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,115 Points Nika Mcguin (2/14/2014 3:00:00 AM)

    This is wonderful, it conveys the experience of being on the beach with both the highs and the lows. I haven't been to a beach in ages (we don't have much of that where I live) so this was like a vacation for me. ^^ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,761 Points Bri Edwards (9/4/2013 8:43:00 PM)

    thanks for the rhyming. thanks for sharing. i saw you, i think:

    She searched for her beach towel,
    her bandeau loose in her hand.
    With binoculars well-focused,
    I missed her toes coated with sand.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (9/3/2013 7:13:00 PM)

    Beutifulful and pretty poem! I love this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie April Hester (8/28/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    Love this poem.... Beach girl :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 152 Points Marcus Mckinley (8/28/2013 10:31:00 AM)

    well it is 55-58 degrees year round in these waters. i am also a beach lover. lots of good surfin' here. nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,313 Points Jesus James Llorico (8/23/2013 8:37:00 PM)

    A combination of heat and cold, a nice and beautiful write.
    It can truly fill one with zest. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/14/2013 11:52:00 AM)

    beautiful poem, the flow and rhyming are good too
    really enjoyed to read it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gleb Zavlanov (8/14/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    This is a very nice poem.It is very melodious and flows freely. I also liked the idea. Thanks for the write. Also, I invite you to read and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,976 Points Tiku . (8/14/2013 7:09:00 AM)

    beautiful poetry.flow and rhyming is nice.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (8/13/2013 9:15:00 PM)

    Nice work....Sand In My Toes....touch my feet so i can feel i am a part of nature, when the water from ocean call them i back to nothingness...just memories left..along the shore_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,360 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2013 8:14:00 AM)

    Ran to the water
    Got outta the heat... lovley expression...10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,573 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/13/2013 7:44:00 AM)

    A nice beach experience. Was it that cold? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,166 Points Sekharan Pookkat (8/11/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    white sugary sand
    pasted in snow coated toes
    sparkle in sunlight
    washed in white frothy waves - I like your style (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (8/9/2013 6:15:00 PM)

    Sweet. I love it too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,919 Points Heather Wilkins (7/30/2013 10:03:00 PM)

    a good beach poem nice to have the sand between your toes 85433 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013


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