(28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

What do you think this poem is about?

####See this boy####

This boy says he is a king,
and he can be all he can be,
he lives life like royalty,
and love being who he be............

This boy shakes his head
over what people say...
he know,
he is not perfect anyway
but he don't let them get in his way.........

This boy has dreams,
dreams that will take his far,
he is ready to show the world,
his thoughts will make his strong...........

This boy...not a king,
this boy...not a perfect,
this boy...has a dream,
this boy is me and he the best,
no matter,
what the world see....

Submitted: Saturday, October 03, 2009


Comments about this poem (####See this boy#### by Mahfooz Ali )

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  • Devendra Barve (4/16/2013 9:09:00 AM)

    I love your poem sir....what a great writer you are.

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  • Abhishek Tiwari (10/9/2011 11:08:00 PM)

    Neither money nor power makes you the king..its your mind that'll make it..
    And so you are the
    Nawab of lucknow..

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  • Sam Varghis (9/11/2011 11:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful. Because man is living in his mind not in the real world. I will read more of yours. I request you to read and comment on my poem, 'The Innocent Village Girl'. Thanks

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  • Anjali Sinha (10/3/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    wow ali
    lovely poem
    yeh ill say like manjusha
    'see this boy'
    dont change
    we all like you as you are
    yeh your the best
    -10 anjali

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  • Kavya Manjusha (10/3/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    This boy...not a king,
    this boy...not a perfect,
    this boy...has a dream,
    this boy is me and he the best,
    no matter,
    what the world see....

    Yaa this is YOU! ! !
    and do not change it no matter what happens..
    YOU ARE THE BEST! ! !
    The poem is coming straight from your heart...this is the reason I am simply flattered...I loved the soul of the poem....
    May the Almighty be with you...Always...

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