Senryu Paper Roses Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Paper Roses

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All those paper roses

a parody of the mind

an imitation.























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Monday, September 16, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
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Dave Walker 16 September 2013

A great little poem, there is a lot of imitations in life we have to watch out for.

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Harindhar Reddy 17 September 2013

A short sweet poem, miming people and poetry is possible..... good imagery.... I like it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 September 2013

Beautiful poem Heather. Very true said, imitation exists.Short and sweet.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 September 2013

Art of imitation humane thank you Heather loved reading your wisdom burst the Senryu

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Sallam Yassin 19 September 2013

what in heart came to mind came to sight in dream of awake every thing became you

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 September 2013

Paper roses are imitations. Yet they do not fade. Beautiful poem.

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Clarence Prince 18 September 2013

Yes just imitation! Well done!

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Ruby Mostazir 18 September 2013

nice love to read dis.......: -)

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Noreen Carden 17 September 2013

Hello Heather as always your poem is beautiful i still have not mastered the art of senryu So my admiration knows no bounds

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