Heather Burns


Senryu Sea Of Life - Poem by Heather Burns

We are but a mist

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Comments about Senryu Sea Of Life by Heather Burns

  • Veteran Poet - 1,885 Points Sallam Yassin (9/19/2013 1:05:00 PM)

    plenty in life but mist
    in sea it takes in season/ bright (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,885 Points Sallam Yassin (9/19/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    plenty in life but mist
    in sea it takes in season/ bright (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,187 Points Clarence Prince (9/18/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    High for a season Only for a season! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (9/15/2013 11:58:00 PM)

    Riding the waves...in and out with the tide....coming and going with the ebb and flow...lovely (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (9/15/2013 10:48:00 PM)

    Soft like downy mist, but when pooled together, massive like an avalanche! There is much depth in this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (9/15/2013 10:48:00 PM)

    Soft like downy mist, but when pooled together, massive like an avalanche! There is much depth in this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (9/15/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    must say how little this poem is but how big meaning it has.... splendid job ma'am (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,788 Points Lyn Paul (9/15/2013 9:11:00 AM)

    So many different reasons. You Captured so much in very few words. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,696 Points Dave Walker (9/15/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    So true, so much said in so few words. A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/15/2013 2:55:00 AM)

    Delicate is life floating on a sea, intangible like the mist, ever changing like the seasons. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/15/2013 12:15:00 AM)

    Life is a graph of ups and downs...lovely imagery. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 12, 2014


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