I see something that I cannot see,
I smell a thing that I can't smell,
I listen to a voice I can't listen to,
I taste a flavor I cannot taste,
I touch one though I can't touch one.
Still deficient is my sixth sense
with a lot of manufacturing faults
but I have my wonderful thoughts
and,
I have sown the seeds of a seventh sense.
Let a million years pass
one of my descendants
will give birth to a super infant,
he will talk as soon as he is born,
he will not come crying,
but,
he will come smiling and singing,
"I see something that you cannot see
I smell a thing you can't smell
I listen to a voice you can't listen to
I taste a flavor that you cannot
I touch a new Eve that hasn't born yet
I have come with an organ for the sixth sense,
and,
I am a new Adam with a seventh sense! "
Excellent crafted poem Akhtar Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
A highly imaginative piece well written. Sometimes if we explore the powers of our mind, we can see things we cannot see and comprehend things that are beyond comprehensible with respect to others. There are people that are gifted, have attributes that are extraordinary. Probably, in the next generations to come, by evolution, things would be a lot different compared with the present. Another thought provoking poem brilliantly penned 10
Nothing is impossible to the one who sees beyond the rainbow. Great poem A delight to ponder.
We do not know what will happen in course of time! Such possibilities of a man with extra human powers cannot be ruled out! Your words can become prophetic!
It may be a fantasy but we have seen all our fantasies become fact one day. A brilliant imagination.
Evolution has magical effect on life. This is really very wonderful. Let a million years pass. This does not matter because seed of seventh sense is sown. Things those are not visible are now visible. The smell previously which is not perceived is now perceived. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderfully crafted Sir Akhtar. Imaginative poem birthed from your seventh sense: -) a 10 Nudershada