Sextuple Senryu For Artificial Things Poem by Marieta Maglas
Sextuple Senryu For Artificial Things
Artificial breaths,
Like mimicking feelings of
Love with empty souls,
Artificial love,
Like sex mimics of drugged, raped
Girls, being in chains,
Artificial sex,
Like mimicking life in the
Dolls for making love,
Artificial life,
Like raping dead women to
Sate sadistic needs,
Artificial need,
Like rape mimics during sex
For excitation
And excitations,
Like artificial breaths for
Necrophiliacs.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
i must like to say it is great write after Niv. and daring also. keep it up., Sex is for creation not for excitation or exploitation. The human has yet to learn so many things from nature and other creature of nature. Great and good job. Special Thanks to Niv. also who raised voice against such social crime.
No matter how much we deny it, this is the ugly truth. Come to think of it, we are all happily living with this lie. This is an equally hard hitting poem yet very different in tone from Niv's I WANT TO BE RAPED. I enjoyed reading this poem. What I loved most about this poem is the openness and honesty with which this poem has been written. Thank you for sharing it with me.
I am a world before I am a man I was a creature before I could stand I will remember before I forget Before I forget that ...... Great piece with highly influenced philosophical doctrines of love hate human and so forth......
A very very powerful poem, the truth is a hard thing to take. A really great poem.
that was awesome. i had to read it twice to get a full understanding.
For some reason, the graphic portrayals you display in this poem work perfectly, in morbid harmony. Bravo!
Nice. i appreciated it a lot. It is an interesting improvement on Nivedita's. U summed up a lot of things too and i agree with u.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/29/2024 3:58:50 AM # 1.0.0.1119
niv writes beyond a soul i love ur poem with a excite to truth