She And He- One Day, Somewhere...(Part-I) Poem by Aman Saa

She And He- One Day, Somewhere...(Part-I)



we have differences she said.
He-even twins have, , , roses and thorns too have
but since times unknown they have been lovers, , ,
She- there in our between a river exists that you cannot swim, , I won't try.
He- no river is ever longer than its bridge, , ,
She- you write yourself… I do not know poems
He-only thing about my poems I feel is they can never be known..
She -I do not even understand..
He- if anything is ever meant to be understood, its not poem, , ,
She- I am a owner of a lively life, , , u said you have many times died…
He- the closest one to life is probably death, , ,
She- I never feel you, ,
He- you have fulfilled me…
She-I have to go,

I will be incomplete forever, ,
try to forget me, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

And he saw the coming of a morning less night as
She walked away with her dying shadow..


reprise

Among the things that cannot be tried, , , those just happen…
forgetting is one… meeting of hearts is one…
Why do you ask me to try things those cannot be tried…
without you I have held myself alive and died a few more times..
I have for a long been with a little sky, , , a little infinite, , ,
I had a only choice when you gifted me a zero….
I could not ever say what you had sought.. 'I have left loving you…'
try to forgive me……………….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 12 May 2012

great technique and perfect wording that make a run-of-the-mill theme very unique! keep it up, young man!

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Shahzia Batool 11 May 2012

Innovative minds are expected to give their best...this poem is different n dramatic...He n She are the poetic device for the loud sharing of the poet's own thinking...Reprise is wonderful, , , ! ! !

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Aman Saa

Aman Saa

Assam, India
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