I know those clouds are the passengers
Of this wide sky and my true messengers;
Those wispy clouds drift across the sky,
Secretly carry the message in me.
They are moving in the whistle of wind
And in this day they're going to find
The one who loves me deep in her mind
And the bees they moon around the flower
Carry the elixir of my love as a shower
To the one who lives far away
And remebers me all through the day
She will feel my love in the whisper of this breeze
Like I give her cheek an affectionate squeeze
She was the one I wanted to love
She's the one I want to be in love
And She will be the one everytime I love
Wow! really the love bug has striked you...this poem is superb my friend... And the bees they moon around the flower carry the elixir of my love as a shower to the one i love who lives far away.
The passengers on the sky(clouds) are the messengers to you to convey your mails. Fantastic! From the time past to time future, she has been and will be your love. Wonderful! 100%
Eureka! What jumping love rhyme, I too created many love rhymes but couldn't get this feeling and tinge! a blasting poems with lines like these with lambent glow peeks every heart... She will feel my love in the whisper of this breeze Like I give her cheek an affectionate squeeze A Romanesque love poem! Great going fellow poet with baronial heart! You won my ADMIRATION! 10+++++++++++++=
Nature is beautifully involved in this connection...it's rich...both in spirit n attire...nice poem to feel proud on! vipins...
Poem shows your single feeling. Still feeling show you being single feeler dear which keeps you singly happy! ! !
nice work, simple words but deep feelings.at the end the question every malayali asks kollathu evideyanu veedu?
as you sail upon the wind to a place that she has been, you will find such beauty...blessings....
The passenger clouds will truly act as messengers and make this eternal, symbolic love to flourish across the boundaries. Great sentiments are flowing with ease in the magical hands.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like it, a really wonderful poem. A great write my friend.