Hardik Vaidya

Rookie - 314 Points (26 Dec 1969, I won't be dead till you know I am alive. / Mahuva, Gujarat, India.)

Shivaratri - Jai Bhole Naath, Jai Shiva Shambu. - Poem by Hardik Vaidya

A skydwafer is being built,
Stealing away a little of my sky.
What a hypocrite am I?
On the 6th floor, I have robbed 6 Skies,
Shankar Shiva Shambhu,
Jai Bhole Naath,
I love your cheeky stance,
The middle eye is pried open,
To give me a gentle peep,
Into the kills of the mind,
Brining in fresh breeze.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Notes:

Shivaratri is a Hindu festival.
Lord shiva is supposed to have a middle eye.
Middle eye is idiotically associated with warth.
I think it is closed because it looks inward.
Today or rather tonight is Shivaratri.

Comments about Shivaratri - Jai Bhole Naath, Jai Shiva Shambu. by Hardik Vaidya

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/10/2013 7:10:00 PM)

    Hi Leslie Philibert I don't think tall buildings are skyscrapers, they dwarf the sky, hence skydwafer. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,181 Points Leslie Philibert (3/10/2013 1:46:00 PM)

    don`t understand skydwafer... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 9, 2013



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