Crystal Castro

Rookie - 48 Points (06-09-1983 / Tacoma Washington)

So In Love - Poem by Crystal Castro

I thought he really love me
I thought our love for one another would never die
for all the times he's mean to me
it really makes me cry

I wish that one day he would understand
the way I feel
and figure out that my love for him
is the love that he had to steal

people say he isn't right for me
but they just can't see
the deep lovin him
that I have always seen

I love him dearly
I hope we never part
but for right now
here I sit with a broken heart

all alone
in this room so cold
I sit here in the corner
trying to be bold

I go outside
look at the stars above
and be happy about why
with him I'm so in love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Written Oct.27,1997

Comments about So In Love by Crystal Castro

  • Veteran Poet - 1,462 Points Tiku . (4/13/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    seems your love is pure and true and divine.beautifully done.liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 275 Points C. P. Sharma (9/19/2013 12:08:00 AM)

    Real true love.never dies. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,952 Points Is It Poetry (4/20/2013 12:50:00 PM)

    In a cell so cold
    my room
    The mirror on the wall
    it tells it all
    When I come back
    to you or not at all......iip (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, April 19, 2013


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