Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,717 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Summer Comes - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Summer comes
splendid in its coming -

bringing to maturity
the promises of Spring.

Summer comes
with the aching wantonness of fertility
and fulfilment

the ripening of moist fruit
soon to harvest

and the pregnancy of
virgin soil.

Summer comes -
eager to bring forth new life.

When Mars conjoins with Venus …..

Summer comes.

Comments about Summer Comes by Valerie Dohren

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (3/7/2014 2:15:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, when summer comes it's time for new beginnings. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 480 Points John Brown (3/4/2014 10:23:00 AM)

    It can't come soon enough for me Val. Nice one my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (3/3/2014 1:03:00 PM)

    Dear Valerie
    tru feels of summer that excites the soul and makes the heart passionate.
    Please read my poems and give your views. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (3/2/2014 8:22:00 PM)

    Summer is a bit too 'eager' for me but I enjoyed your lusty poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 828 Points Juan Olivarez (2/28/2014 8:18:00 AM)

    Can't come soon enough for me.; -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,824 Points * Sunprincess * (2/26/2014 2:19:00 PM) beautiful and so fine...I wish for spring to come soon and summer also...would be nice to spend some time on the beach...enjoyed this one.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,718 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/26/2014 12:23:00 PM)

    Poetry comes
    bursting with beauty

    Poetry comes
    Crammed with creativity

    Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (2/26/2014 1:08:00 AM)

    a delicate poem in beautiful words...nice imagery in graphic depiction...
    @ Dinesh Nair: my apt comment from our point of view! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,718 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (2/25/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    Summer comes -
    eager to bring forth new life.
    Everyone waits for new life. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 828 Points Juan Olivarez (2/25/2014 8:11:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem Val. Unfortunately here in Texas there is no virgin soil. It is very promiscuous. Lol. Yes winter seems to be over here. We are already in the eighties. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,520 Points Sandra Feldman (2/24/2014 12:49:00 AM)

    Absolutely ravishing. Best Rebirth of Nature I have ever read.
    Astonishingly perfect, I swear.
    Such a delight.!
    Lucky are those that will read it for they shall see poetry at its best! (and inherit the Earth at the same time) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kerry Sheridan (2/23/2014 5:34:00 PM)

    This poem makes me full of anticipation. I love the effect, thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 749 Points Lawerence Mize (2/23/2014 12:56:00 PM)

    Just what I needed to keep the winter blues at bay. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,686 Points Hazel Durham (2/23/2014 9:27:00 AM)

    A stunning write with great use of words to bring summer, a time of fulfilment and to rejoice in the expectation of new horizons! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,825 Points Anthony Di''anno (2/23/2014 4:05:00 AM)

    A beautifully expressive piece of writing Val. As ever your heart flows freely through your verse. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (2/23/2014 12:55:00 AM)

    Ah! Valerie, your English Sun is coming in his chariot soon
    And our Indian Sun is going to charge against us later with no hopes left.
    Your summer is your pride and our envy. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,183 Points Hans Vr (2/22/2014 10:13:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem full of hope. Nicely written. A great ten (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,183 Points Hans Vr (2/22/2014 10:13:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem full of hope. Nicely written. A great ten (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 22, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 23, 2014

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