abdul razaq

Rookie - 0 Points (august 10,1971 / faisalabad, pakistan)

Sun Is On It's Way - Poem by abdul razaq

Sun is wandering and wandering
it is still finding someone, somewhere
sun never becomes hopeless
days, months, years, centuries have passed
sun is still travelling, without stopping
it is yet determent to get it, s goal
whatever the difficulties are on the way
sun is dare to face

abdul razaq
28 march,2008

Comments about Sun Is On It's Way by abdul razaq

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/5/2008 6:33:00 PM)

    yeahh razaq...........we can't live without the sun forever............... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (4/4/2008 10:08:00 AM)

    And so it is. On its way. It is best we know not its
    destiny, nor ours.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Katherine Wiley (3/31/2008 1:02:00 AM)

    A very nice poem about the sun, along with your others. You are making headway and building up a nice collection. kat (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 6, 2008

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