Sunburst Poem by Fay Slimm
Sunburst
Leaden for days, the sky wept sombre rain.
Sullen clouds banked up lowering gloom,
Shading with hazy mist my flowers again.
Summer was stifled, and soon this noonday
Would herald more wet, but forgetting much
Previous wonder, I mistake a change
In the face of the roses. They cease clutching
Their stems, and flush. Brightness re-arranges
The sky. They and I turn to encounter
A sunburst vividly slicing with light
All the grey, and blue appears, errupts founts
Of orange blush onto the gloom. Fighting
For room the sun explodes, cracks a hole, splits
Asunder all veils - and brilliance emits.
When the eastern sky splits and the skies will dance with colors, And a bright light shall reach out of the heaven to call all of his children home. There I will set beside of my sister Fay. A flower pick by God's Sweet Hand Sooooo Beautiful sweet Fay 10++++++++++++++++
Akin to a Shakespearean sonnet. I love the change in mood - 'Sunburst' says it all! S :)
'Fighting for room the sun explodes, cracks a hole, splits Asunder all veils - and brilliance emits.' Spectacular image! A perfect conclusion to a fine poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Spectacular vivid amazing poem! The last five lines went off with a blast in my head. You are a true artist Fay in every way. 10 Karin Anderson
this poem has a unique rhyming scheme. that causes it to seem liek askipped heart beat.. i likey
A gunmetal sky heralds the rain another bleak day spent inside again the woodland flowers look so forlorn till kissed by the sun, natures reborn Ne'er cast a clout till May is out! summer is just around the corner! lovely poem Fay, thank you
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Beautiful fiery write Fay....love the images I get from this....Fi 10+++