Amy Edson

Rookie - 57 Points (England)

Sunshine - Poem by Amy Edson

Fill me with your shining light
a touch of strength
a touch of might.

You open up to me
and light up my day.
Dear sunshine,
never fade away.

At night you go to lay your head
then moonlight takes over
it shines on my bed.

I make a wish to one of its shining companions
and go to sleep
awaiting my next sun shining day


Comments about Sunshine by Amy Edson

  • Gold Star - 15,628 Points John Westlake (8/28/2014 6:25:00 PM)

    A nice happy poem. If only it could be sun shine every day, but unfortunately rain is important. Still it's nice to dream. Stay strong (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,120 Points Mandolyn ... (7/20/2014 9:02:00 PM)

    you have a misspell in the 4th line (I do that all the time!)
    :)
    sweet simple poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 20, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 20, 2014


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