Surroundings-53 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Surroundings-53

Rating: 5.0


Scarlet Surroundings-4

Her soundless presence in scarlet pleasance
Accidental, I saw through the window
Late June now though
May flower turned June flower She still lures
Just in one single bunch
At the tip of a long branch
May be in extended mood with extended blooms
Now agape! ! I look, she looks!
Shhh, we're talking mindful heart to heart

Wednesday, June 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 11 July 2018

Beautiful poem, love for nature presented very well. Nature tells us a lot. Loved reading it.

0 0 Reply
Valsa George 30 June 2018

Looking at flowers is always a pleasure! Scarlet red is very striking and will never fail to catch our eyes! I too sit by the window of my living room and look at the flowers blooming in my garden! I feel I can keep looking at them for any length of time! So temperamentally, we both are lovers of flowers. A heart to heart talk always takes place between Nature and we humans, though it may not be audible. Well inked!

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2018

Well executed poem astutely presented. I appreciate this poem.

0 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 June 2018

Very nicely penned! Liked the last line most, 'Shhh, we're talking mindful heart to heart'..Thanks dear madam for sharing...10

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success