Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,717 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Sweet Angeline In Heav`n Did Weep - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Sequestered deep in mystic realms
`Midst all the stars in full display
Encircled there by misty souls
I heard her sad soliloquy

Sweet Angeline in heav`n did weep
Her tears upon the world were spilled
Lamenting as one lost in dreams
Of dreams yet dreamed but unfulfilled

Those tears, they fell so like the rain,
As gentle snowflakes drifting by -
With broken heart, as shattered glass,
So like a nursling she did cry

She spoke of love she barely knew
That precious love, elysian kind,
That all her heart would so enchant
Yet all her life she sought to find

She looked in woodlands void of light
Beneath the darkened moonlit sky
In cloistered caves and valleys deep
In dusky glens she wandered by

With hope she searched in twilight`s gloom
In shaded arbours strung with vine
She cried as one in sorrow deep
(I heard her weep tnroughout all time)

Yet never once to glance above
Towards the sun, with brighter glow,
Nor seek to find her heart`s delight
In places high not set below

Sweet Angeline in heav`n did weep
In sadness ne`er to feel nor find
The love that she so yearned to know
In dusty hollows of her mind

Comments about Sweet Angeline In Heav`n Did Weep by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 36,621 Points * Sunprincess * (10/2/2012 3:31:00 AM)

    Oh Val you penned a perfect poem with a beautiful message.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (9/5/2012 3:26:00 PM)

    Love yourself first! Oh how I love this beautiful poem, gently and sorrowful with a poinant message at the end (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Linda May Fox (6/20/2012 12:02:00 PM)

    Just beautiful and full of imagery. Like rhyme scheme too. Love reading your work! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (4/4/2012 11:43:00 PM)

    Perfect imagery for a beautiful poem. Love the meter. Well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 786 Points Patti Masterman (4/2/2012 11:56:00 AM)

    I would almost swear I commented on this before. I think it has that classical feel of perfection that makes
    you think you must have encountered it- somewhere, sometime before- or else, PH is hiding my comments from me again. Anyway, it's really something; majestic, poetic, timeless and exquisite. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (3/27/2012 4:39:00 PM)

    This is so very beautiful, a truly fantastic poem, really love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (3/27/2012 8:21:00 AM)

    Yet another little gem from the mind of Valerie, haunting and dreamlike.
    I'd swear I can hear Harps playing in the background! Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (3/26/2012 9:08:00 PM)

    Valerie, you are indeed the queen of romantic and tender poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (3/26/2012 3:49:00 PM)

    Dear sweet Angeline, That was such a wonderful poem, I loved every verse, it was so descriptive. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Lucy Lae (3/26/2012 10:17:00 AM)

    I love the beautiful images that your words inspire and the haunting feeling of elusive love (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (3/26/2012 8:34:00 AM)

    Undiscovered love projected through romantics imaginings, maybe we are all guilty of such desires at some time as overly dramatic as they may later seem on reflection. A good poem to explore the concept. Lovely rhymes and lyrical tone. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 22, 2012

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