Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 2) Poem by Theany Ouy

Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 2)

Rating: 3.9


Executed by love...
A weapon of mass destruction,
Torn between everything
My heart becomes dysfunction.
An attack so cruel...
That one heart cannot hold to defend,
Level of disability is low
This battle must come to an end.
Only memories remain
Leaving trails of blood behind,
Once the rain has washed away...
The tracks will be hard to find.
Hallucination takes view
A moment of death reveals,
Your absence penetrates through my soul,
Has caused my heart to drown in tears.
Retrieve your attack
For I have long awaited,
To defend and take victory...
My love will retaliate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uche Chidozie 03 November 2011

retaliation and violence dominates the mood of this poem, but in actually sense the poet hope to bring victory and happiness after all her moment of persecution because of love. Good work fellow bard.

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Richard McClellan 04 November 2011

I like this one better than #1... more rhyming... :)

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

again, I feel your soul in this, and that makes is a good write....but..I can also relate very well...blessings

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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 November 2011

Again, very descriptive. (Try, 'Surprise, Surprise' when you have time.

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Tasha Scott 05 November 2011

this is getting good! ! ! ! ! =)

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Stan Petrovich 01 May 2015

Theany, I now edit PoitryHaus.com & wish you would join. We only have 40-something members and nobody is posting enough (except me I guess) .

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Stan Petrovich 07 December 2011

Exceptionally better than Chaoter! ....

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Ambitions provoking in this one.Greatly done by over boundary imaginations and milieu...

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

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