Tanka ~ Together. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ Together.

Rating: 5.0


Twilight in pale blue
Illuminating darkness
a long winter night ~
once again together
nectar and the honeybee

Tuesday, December 14, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: together,lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Hacks 14 December 2021

Nectar and honeybee together..Excellent imagery.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 December 2021

Very lovely!

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Kostas Lagos 14 December 2021

Lovely!

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Sandra Feldman 15 December 2021

Your inspired and magnificent description brings to us all the beauty of love, Excellent!

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Poetic Sky 15 December 2021

Yes night time is for togetherness. Warm and cosy.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 16 February 2022

Superb return to origin.

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Indira Renganathan 17 December 2021

You have defined a way to express this concept....indeed a modest love poem....5*****

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Imagery that picturises sou's yearning.Brilliant creation!

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Michael Jack 15 December 2021

Wonderful poem 💖

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Mamta S 15 December 2021

Another gem. Short and excellent.

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