Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

Thanksgiving - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

O My friend
I just had my supper
Wondering why I'm telling you

It was cooked by you
Lines of surprise
Oh they are coming
Your curiosity, swiftly running
Still wondering
Listen to me
And stop pondering
The supper was yummy
As if made by my mummy
Restlessness,
Ah I see it coming
Oh Your curiosity
How honest & uncunning
Stopping the tease
Making you at ease
I unveil the truth
The Supper you sent me
Of your beautiful world
of which you made me a pearl
Mesmerize my all sensations
Fills me with joy n celebrations
Oh I forgot to mention
That you're really amazing
In your absence
Even snow starts freezing
Sitting so far
I have nothing to offer you
Thanksgiving is all
which I can give you


Comments about Thanksgiving by Freespirit Juneja

  • Sherif Monem Sherif Monem (7/8/2012 8:31:00 AM)

    easy reading and nice. (Report) Reply

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  • Dead Leaf (6/9/2012 2:30:00 AM)

    Nice poem....

    -sanu (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah Rajendran Muthiah (6/7/2012 1:08:00 AM)

    Beautifully written free verse poem. (Report) Reply

  • Samra Haq Samra Haq (6/2/2012 5:16:00 PM)

    Very nice poem beautiful poem. I like the title of your poem by the name of Thanks giving. Especially I like the ending of your poem the you have ended it. Superb (Report) Reply

  • Vangile Mtyali Vangile Mtyali (6/2/2012 2:55:00 AM)

    pla write I had supper not a supper n also say, it was cooked by you (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/1/2012 10:40:00 PM)

    Still have this memory, but back here to remember thou thanksgiving! enjoy the day_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • David Gerardino David Gerardino (5/5/2012 10:00:00 AM)

    I like the idea! but, the story seems to be all over the place. (Report) Reply

  • Brianna Winebarger Brianna Winebarger (4/24/2012 7:24:00 AM)

    love it...to me it seems intense love (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (4/23/2012 11:19:00 PM)

    Love is sweeter, sweet sentiments are smiling here. We must thank Almighty go for giving us great things in our lives. Nice poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Aditi Khandelwal Aditi Khandelwal (4/22/2012 7:36:00 AM)

    Sitting so far
    I have nothing to offer u
    Thanksgiving is all
    which I can give u

    Really nice poem...
    Aditi (Report) Reply

  • Khushi Throne (4/21/2012 6:22:00 PM)

    i am say to....Thanksgiving'' bcaz i invited to read own poem.it is very nice words...... (Report) Reply

  • Claudia Krizay Claudia Krizay (4/21/2012 4:52:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading this- great job (Report) Reply

  • Donna Caldwell (4/20/2012 12:06:00 PM)

    Really good poem! enjoyed this! (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (4/20/2012 11:21:00 AM)

    A great poem, really like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • <font color=00FFCC>teal Sky</font> teal Sky (4/20/2012 9:30:00 AM)

    even sitting so far, i have something to say!
    these lines are amazing, great thought, imagination: -
    The Supper u sent me......
    Of your world and words...
    Flying on the love birds
    this one is quite complex, needs some work for the reader to understand it thoroughly.but once i understood it, it was beautiful
    good poem.
    but what i can't help noticing is the use of........., is there anything special about it? (Report) Reply

  • Wabi Sabi Wabi Sabi (4/20/2012 6:40:00 AM)

    wow! that is a sweet poem.
    I am sure that you are loving!
    One day I want someone like you have written! (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine Diane Hine (4/20/2012 6:18:00 AM)

    Charming and delightful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Neetha Sasidharan Neetha Sasidharan (4/20/2012 5:33:00 AM)

    even snow starts freezzzing wow...i liked dat very much....gud job (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (4/19/2012 11:28:00 PM)

    Huh! Enjoyed. Write more.Waiting for your next. (Report) Reply

  • Jose Guevara (4/19/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    There, well expressed even through the constriction of rhyming (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 9, 2013


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