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(09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

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The Aphrodite

Embraced in Seraph's wings
I had my last sight
New world to a new world
I was flying like a kite
From nowhere her warmth came
Snapped my beautiful flight
Fearing I might loose him
I held him(Seraph) so tight
Soon he could not bear it
Left me alone to fight
Then I got my own wings
To guard me from her sight
Warmth started embracing me
I couldn't find respite
Soon she started kissing me
Restless was my plight
I twisted, I turned
but her presence was too bright
Defeated me, finally opened my eyes
Flickered a bit in that vivid light
Mesmerized & startled to see
I was held by The Aphrodite


The Aphrodite

The new life of every day
First melody of every soul
Adorned with music of Avians
Smiling with blossomed flowers
Freshness of new feelings
With the blanket of Love
The Aphrodite is no one, but
The beautiful rays of Sun(morning)

(Here they're coming from the windows of my room)

Submitted: Sunday, June 10, 2012
Edited: Friday, January 25, 2013


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It starts with sleeping at night and getting up in the morning.It's a quest between one's desire to sleep but the sunshine coming from the window won't let him / her sleep..

Seraph..... a member of the highest order of angels, often represented as a child's head with wings above, below, and on each
side
Ist 2 lines state that I was about to go to sleep

Then In the next 2 I was dreaming

Then the sunlight comes, the first few rays touch me, the dream phase got over and subsequently the fight to sleep starts

The Aphrodite...I opened my eyes n see from the window the beautiful morning sunlight... The music of birds.... The smell of flowers....renewed me..... the feeling of love.

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  • Babatunde Aremu (11/19/2012 3:30:00 PM)

    Appreciating nature in a unique style. Great write

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  • * Sunprincess * (10/7/2012 12:18:00 AM)

    wow..awesome poem..I love the sun..your poets notes of
    the birds and flowers along with honeybees
    of course.. is exactly why I love springtime the best.. :)

  • Captain Cur (7/6/2012 4:22:00 PM)

    You had me soaring with this poem.
    Sunlight, Aphrodite. I'd take the girl anytime.
    Great poem.

  • Oladehinde J. Ibikunle (6/23/2012 5:13:00 PM)

    Excellent poem, nice one, my dear poet!

  • Tarundeep Kaur (6/12/2012 7:45:00 AM)

    Nice piece of work...It gives a feeling of divinity...something pure..interpreted in many wayzzz...like motherly touch/ or d one u luv d most..gives u a secured feeling...Keep going sharad :) :)
    Regards Tarun :)

  • Eric Cockrell (6/11/2012 8:09:00 PM)

    when we are defeated by ecstatic love, we are born anew!

  • Hana Elabe (6/11/2012 4:23:00 PM)

    Nice poem it really got my attention keep it up =}

  • Ramesh Rai (6/11/2012 7:21:00 AM)

    The new life of every day
    First melody of every soul

  • Indira Babbellapati (6/11/2012 7:08:00 AM)

    poetic...........................! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • Swetha Vvr (6/11/2012 5:46:00 AM)

    you brought out a divine explanatory thing b/w soporfic state and laziness to still lay on bed.
    opening lines of sunlight....a true wise twist! !

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